I love that you tried to capture the beauty of an elderly woman's eyes. Too often people are blind to it. What distracts me from the photograph is that the one eye is out of focus, and the nose is cropped too tight. I would like to see all or none of the nose. The lighting is wonderful.
People with wrinkled faces always have a story to tell. Unfortunately, this photograph could be improved with better composition. I wish I could have seen more of her face rather then her forehead or even close up of her eyes. I also think there could have been better lighting to draw out the eyes and really define her wrinkles. It was good but it missed the mark, so I put this in 2nd place.
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I love that you tried to capture the beauty of an elderly woman's eyes. Too often people are blind to it. What distracts me from the photograph is that the one eye is out of focus, and the nose is cropped too tight. I would like to see all or none of the nose. The lighting is wonderful.
4th place - love the concept but feel that the eyes are not the focus. Would have like more clarity.
2nd place -
Great subject
Poor composition
People with wrinkled faces always have a story to tell. Unfortunately, this photograph could be improved with better composition. I wish I could have seen more of her face rather then her forehead or even close up of her eyes. I also think there could have been better lighting to draw out the eyes and really define her wrinkles. It was good but it missed the mark, so I put this in 2nd place.
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